“P, P, P” Chris yelled Precious relieved to hear Chris calling her was able to move out of the spot that she had been frozen in when she heard the gunshots go off. She grabbed her bags and ran to the door and jumped into Chris’ arms and began kissing him “Oh my God baby you’ve been shot!” “Yeah P, we have to get out of here we have to get to Nikki call you sister and tell her to go somewhere safe. I don’t know what the hell she did but somebody wants her dead we have to go now!” “Chris why are you running up the step I thought you said we had to get out of here. I’m not jumping off of the roof!” Chris responded with silence and just grabbed her hand tighter. Once they reached the seventh floor apartment Chris took out a key and opened the door to what looked like an old abandoned condo but was as empty as bag of Doritos at fat camp. It reminded Precious of a warehouse. Once inside Chris slowly closed the door as he heard the apartment below being ransacked. He ran over to the window and peaked out where he saw three men standing in the front of the building. “Chris, how are we going to get out of here?” “Baby look you’re just going to have to trust me, In the closet down the hallway is a chute, after I dropped you off I peeped it out and it seemed have still been working. The only way out of here is to slide down the chute but it’s seven stories up we have to go now because these people will be up here any minute busting down all the doors to find me. Here since your going first I want you to start the car and just have it running get in the passenger seat and leave the drivers door open” Without another word Precious opened the small compartment that would lead to outside and jumped down. “Ahhhhhhhhhhh” was all you could hear as Precious slid down the chute. She landed in a pile of garbage and after a few seconds she was able to gain her balance and get out. Doing as she was told Precious got out of the trash and started the car. Rattled by a knock on the window Precious looked over to see a man dressed in all black. Unlock the back door and keep your mouth shut if you know what’s good for you. Just then things took a turn for the worse. Seeing Chris jigging towards the car she felt a bit of relief but knew that it wouldn’t last long. She turned to look at the man who was now lying on the floor in the back of the car he turned to her and said “Bitch turn the fuck around and don’t try no slick shit if you value your life.” “Babe did you call Nikki we have to get to her right now!” Chris said as he closed the door to the car and began driving. “Well well, just what the fuck I wanted for you to take me to Nikki, did you think that damn garbage chute shit was going to work? That shit only works in the movies, but you know what I have a heart because my goons wanted to move the garbage can and just kill your narrow ass but I figured nah let me let you take me to the trophy bitch so I can get my money! Did you really think you could just run off with one hundred g’s like that? You are fuckin mistaken now drive and don’t try no slick shit or else you and this fine ass Tender Roni are dead!” The man in the mask said while holding the gun to Chris head. Looking over at Precious “Damn baby girl you sure are fine, how old are you anyway?” While playing in her hair with the gun; Precious looked the gunman directly in the eyes and through clenched teeth said 17.” (I know precious used to be 14 but this is the revised version!) Just the thought of fucking her made his dick hard. ‘Baby girl let your hair down let me see all that beautiful black hair you got.” Precious looked to Chris and he gave her a go ahead nod. Just then Precious took her hair down and just let it sit in place. “Damn Bitch do something sexy shake it out or something turn a nigga on and I might let your cute ass live!” Precious began to shake her hair and ran her fingers trough it and began moaning as one hand was between her legs playing with herself through her pants… “Like that; baby is this how you want me to do it?” Chris looked over at precious as if she had lost her mind but figured she knew what she was doing, he just made a mental note that if they made it out of this to whoop her ass. He figured the only way to keep her in line was to start putting her in line. They had come a long way they had been together since she was 14 and now watching her grow into a mature young woman he had to keep her away from motherfuckers like the gunman and any other man that wanted to look at her. His rational was that if he made her too scared to even look at another man she would be his forever! He had noticed that over the past few months when he would pick her up from school there were at least three guys standing around with her. Granted there were girls there too but seeing how beautiful she was each day he couldn’t help but become jealous, he knew that Precious wasn’t cheating on him but he just had to make sure she never did and this little stunt here had him questioning her loyalty. Was that still his pussy?

“T I just got a text message from precious I told her to meet me at my house what the hell could possibly be going on?” “ I don’t know baby girl but I know that Alexis is taking a turn for the worst and if I didn’t know any better I would think she’s on that stuff she wasn’t looking to good and I know from when we used to go to those industry parties remnants of powder on the table is not from donuts!” I just hope Pre…” “T, please, I know you are not going to say what I think you are, you know just as well as I do that Precious would never do anything like that!” “I’m just saying you know I love her like a little sister but remember that’s what your moms used to say about you when you were her age and you know what we were doing.” Nikki didn’t say anything she just drove in silence while the though of her sister doing coke sank into her head.”

“Chris you don’t mind if I ask your girl to come back here with me.” Spoken more as a statement than a question Chris couldn’t hold his tongue anymore especially since he looked over at Precious and the look of terror she had on her face made his heart ache. “hell no she aint going back there with you is you crazy nigga, if you lay one finger on her I swear to God you’ll be seeing your maker way before you planned!” With that statement the gunman gun butted Chris in the back of the head and dared him to crash the car. While the gunman grabbed Precious by the hair and pulled her to the back with him, Chris struggled not to loose control of the car. “Ahhhh get off of me you’re hurting me!” Precious yelled as she fell into the backseat of the car. “Bitch shut the fuck up, I just wanted your ass to come back here with me and keep me company, but you know what I have something fun for us to do” With blood now leaking from his head and his shoulder from where he had been shot Chris was feeling dizzy. “Yo my man I don’t think I’ll be able to drive the rest of the way I’m loosing a lot of blood here, how about you take control of the wheel.” Bitch stop whining we’re almost there just keep your eyes on the road.” Focusing back on Precious the gunman outlined her face down her breast with the tip of the gun. Although Precious was scared to death and shaking it made her nipples hard. The gunman took notice and let out a loud laugh and whispered in her ear “I bet you I could fuck you way better than he ever could!” he then began sucking on her ear and neck unconscious as to what she was doing precious tilted her neck and gave the gunman free reign to do as he pleased. Looking in the rearview mirror Chris saw everything that was going on and knew from that moment if the gunman didn’t he was going to kill Precious because she was enjoying what was going on too much!

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THISSITEISCRAZY,

guys let me know what you think...Wether I should keep going or leave the shit alone...

2009-01-30 12:29:26

sir nicholas,

ok u gave us an ending and now revised it so i need another ending.. the story is good, id def like to know whats teh outcome of this car scene... and if rick will get what he wants... lets keep the party going (lol)

deuces....

2009-01-30 14:53:30

StoryTella,

Hey TSIC

I love the revised edition..lol Precious betta not let that gunman hit it..LOL

always a fan,
ST

2009-01-30 17:11:34

Bitch,

didnt this shit already end? How are you going to just pick up a story in the middle, don't follow the story line mind you and just try a new ending. And FYI its not called a revised story its an ALTERNATE ENDING!! WACK!!! I didn't even read this shit.

2009-01-31 10:52:44

Keep it going girl ,I like this new rivised addition! You have skills and i really enjoy reading you stories. I love the way you have stepped up your game with your newedt work. Keep doing what you do and ingnore those lame haters.

2009-02-02 00:14:44

Keep it going girl ,I like this new rivised edition! You have skills and I really enjoy reading your stories. I love the way you have stepped up your game with your newest work. Keep doing what you do and ingnore those lame haters.
(I forgot to proof read)

2009-02-02 00:18:09

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