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Til' Death--(Introduction)

Lamiya~~

Theres no limit to the way that Summit loved me. We had that unconditional love that the ol folks use to talk about back in the day. I guess i was one of those girls that was just so use to settling for less that i couldnt fully appreciate all that Summit wanted to offer me. But just as our love was unconditional it was also the craziest relatoinship ive ever been in. Summit was jealous hearted and he was controlling and possessive. He was determined to give me the world to make me stay or take it and everyone in it I loved away from me. He loved me to death...Now look where its left me.. Dead.

 

To All Readers:

ok i know where i want to go with this story but if anyone wants to help or has any advice or ideas then PLEASE it is very welcome!!!!!\

Thanks, Jade Williams

 
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James Marks,
Just from the intro i can see there will be some good pages to this story. I like the way your headed and its your story you tell it how you feel. Goodluck
2009-03-05 10:10:57
MzKeepItReal,
OHHHH my goodness.. PLEASE continue.. I love tear jerkers.. COME ON WITH THE EFIN COME ON!! LOL.. I'M READY.. I NEED A REASON TO VISIT.. THIS MAY BE IT..
2009-03-05 11:09:51
StoryTella,
Agree with my girl MzKeepItReal...this has great potential...good luck can't wait to read what Summit and Lamiya went through
2009-03-05 12:25:58
MiSs t ,
ok i hope she felt dead but is not actually dead !!!! u got some explainin to do n ill be waitin ....holla! do u
2009-03-05 12:26:58
shortymac,
This is a very good start to some well needed DRAMA!
You know what would b the bomb...if you could start a story and other readers could add a chapter and so on...and if that chapter didn't get enough votes from the other readers it gets deleted. You know or something like that...

Just a thought. But keep it cuming....
2009-03-05 12:29:13
courious,
yeah continue... go with the flow....
2009-03-05 16:44:41
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