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JUST YOU WAIT...LOL (30)

as I watch the body hit the floor, I felt myself go numb...dis shit ain't happening was all I could think. I just stood in amazement. What I can say though in spite of everything that just played out...after the bullet hit, Jaz managed to let out a smurk...one of those I'm relieved smurked, maybe she could be at peace for that blink of a moment, but I couldn't! My thoughts were quickly cut off by a screaming Trina "OH MY FUCKING GAWD! WHAT DA FUCK!...OH MY GAWD, OH MY GAWD!" All eyes where now on Kyree...dis nigga had just laid out Rahim and it wasn't no telling who was next! I spoke to soon...within seconds of Rahim's body hitting the floor, Kyree soon followed, slumping over still clutching the burner. Again I was stuck...stuck on the fact that my man kyree just took my man Rahim the fuck up outta here! Breaking me out of my conscience somber..."Rareem, get dat guunnn..." Jaz mustered out through missing teeth and blood...seem like Trina must've been thinking the same thing because we shared a look for a brief mili second and both dove for Rahim's burner...as I grabbed the burner, Jaz grabbed Trina's leg, from there it was all she wrote...with her free leg, Trina managed a swift kick to Jaz's mid section only to eventually plummet back to the floor as Jaz continued holding on to her...once on the floor, what could only be described as a duel to da death ensued...Jaz grabbed hold of Trina's face, clawing down and tearing threw Trina's cheeks, only when she stopped in the corner of her mouth, Trina clamped down and began chowing on Jaz's fingers like meal time..."AAAAAAAAAARRRRRHHHHHHHH" was all I heard jaz muster as she began to punch at Trina's nose...I ain't gone lie...Trina was a bad mafucka...dis broad been taking head shots all day....Jaz must've been the breaking point doe...cuz the fourth blow to Trina's dome sent her flying backward..."A YO...FUCKING CHILL YO!" I spat as made my way over to them while clutching the burner. As I got between them, it seemed like their kicking was becomming more wild until one caught contact with my dick...I plummeted, the burner fell somewhere between me falling and the folllow up kick I recieved to my eye once on the floor...at this point...it's three mafucka on the floor and a burner in between the milieu...

 
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DA GAME,
wus da deal peoples...yea it's about dat time...or so I think...LOL...i enjoy all the feed back, both positive and negative...so keep it comming...I must be doing be doing something right LOL...yall hold me down and the finally is cumming...JUST YOU WAIT...LOL
2009-01-15 21:04:50
Honey,
I've waited long enough, so bring it on
2009-01-16 08:07:23
DA GAME,
I left it as as because y'all left my feed back as is lol...lemme atleast get more than one fan that wants me to finish...or atleast bring in the next SAGA...JUST YOU WAIT...LOL
2009-05-30 03:06:38
deedie504,
u need 2 finish this story!its tooooooooooooooooooooooo interessting!
2009-06-10 20:50:46
this aint right,
hmmmmmmm. . . . I found this story by accident, however once I started it I had to keep reading, I think you have a good story here, however you may sacrifice your followers for you continula need of praise man! When you got it! You got! Bruh you have it, no need to consistanly beg and use literary manipulation to have your ego stroked. Writing is an art and when you are a great artist such as yourself you understand that many people will not always respect or appreciate the gift or the expression but for the love of the art you continue on! This was a great story with some serious turns. I noticed in the begining you got EVERYONE all wet rock hard and gushy and then shook em into panick fear and shock all with your words. What I say may never matter but bruh never promote the need to have your ego stroked over your gifts desire and ability to be used, shared, and expressed! It takes away from you a lil bit. Now as far as the negative comments keep rising above that is casue you
2011-03-15 08:53:57
this aint right,
Got it man! You got it! Thanks for sharing with us! Thanks for excitingus, and thanks for giving us a good story, its been a while (at least for me) since I found some good reads!
2011-03-15 08:55:51
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