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...nothing! Damn...dis goofy ass broad must've dropped when I was dragging her dumb ass. Interupting my thoughts Jaz cut in, breathing hard and crying "SO IS THIS WHY YOU CALLED ME HERE KYREE? SO YALL COULD SHOOT ME? HUH? I DESERVE DIS SHIT? HUH? I THOUGHT IT WAS DA OTHER WAY AROUND? I THOUGHT CHU WAS GONE SHOOT RAHIM IF YOU HAD TO...HMPH!..."WHAT?" Rahim Roared..."DA FUCK SHE TALKING BOUT REE?" he continued...glaring at Kyree wit daggers. I ain't know what da fuck was going yo...thisshit is like a mafukin dream...shit can't be real, I mean it's like I ain't hearing nis shit...once again my thought regimen was interupted..."she...urghleb, dawg...glurb...dawg...she lyyyin yo...kill dis bitch dawg" kyree mustered out through blood stained coughs..."DA FUCK YOU MEAN SHE LYING? A YO REE...DA FUCK IS SHE TALKING BOUT DAWG? U STUPID BITCH...DA FUCK IS U TALKING BOUT?" Rahim spat...looking from Ree to Jazz....all the while I'm just standing in the middle of this shit...waiting to see what the fuck was bout to spew next..."I'm lying?" Jaz shot while facing Kyree..."I'm lying huh? I guess I'm lying about being pregnant to right? Cool...If I'm lying go head shoot me Kyree, Kill me, Jahmir, and your unborn son BITCH!" she spat...Da fuck her dumbass advertising me for...shit...kill all yall ass and let me da fuck be..."WHAT BITCH?" Rahim roared as he grabbed Jaz by a handful of her hair. "LEMME GO!" Jaz screamed..."FUCKING LETCHU GO? FUCK YOU BITCH! DIS WHY YOU WANTED ABORTION AINT IT! AINT IT! YOU FUCKING HOR!" Rahim barked..."Lemme go Rahim you hurtin' me!" Jaz cried...as I stand in the middle of the floor, I couldn't help but think about my next move...some shit is bout to pop off and I could feel it, I happend to glance at Ree, still clutching his neck, he seemed a lil bit puzzled, I also noticed even though dis nigga had his burner clutched, it wasn't dead on me...it was resting at his side...dis nigga must not of known Jaz was knocked wit his seed, fuk all that...maybe I could dash and hit da garage...nah, I don't know where Trina dropped da burner, plus dis nigga Rah fuk around and..."oh bitch please...you hurtin' me!"  Trina mocked Jazz while sitting on the floor..."Don't nobody give a fuck how you feel, you wasn't worried about how nobody else felt when you ran a bitch business down to her man was you?" Trina spat..."BITCH SHUT DA FUCK UP!" Jazz responded...Rahim maintained his grip and pulled her closer..."YOU BEEN FUCKING NIS NIGGA? HUH?" Rahim shot..." YESSSS!" Jaz cried out...with that, Rahim took the barrel of the gun and cracked her dead in her mouth, shattering atleast 3 of her top row teeth; she automatically buckled and fell to her knees covering her mouth. Rahim then pointed the burner at Ree who returned the stance while clutching his neck..."All dis time dawg?" Rahim asked while holding back tears..." I thought chu loved a nigga dawg? Hmph...I fucking loved you yo...you was my heart nigga...you said we was gone be together after dis shit was OVER NIGGA!" Rahim roared, tears streaming with his last two words..."URB...I DO!" Ree mustered..."UHN...FABWETS...yall FABWEES!" Jazz managed through missing teeth and blood..."FAGGOTS!" Raheem spat..." we faggots huh? BITCH GET DA FUCK UP!" Rahimm spat as he grabbed her up by her hair once more. While clutching her hair he forced the gun in her mouth..."Yea bitch we faggots...you wanna know what faggots do?" Rahim questioned her...as she continued crying, he began to thrust the gun in and out her mouth simulating a dick..."WHO A FAGGOT NOW...HUH? YOU A FAGGOT? Hmmm?" as he continued thrusting the gun out of her mouth...Kyree leaned up against the wall and slowly began sliding as if he was weakining..."YOU LIKE DAT?" Rahim growled..."ANSWER ME!" he roared as he began to unbuckle his pants...

 

 
Comments
DA GAME,
ITS GOING DOWN PEOPLE LOL IF YALL DON'T START GIVING ME FEEDBACK...AINT SHIT GOING DOWN YOU DIGG LOL...LEMME KNOW IF YALL READY FOR DA NEXT INSTALLMENT...
2008-12-05 19:17:31
uninterested,
everyone is not giving you feedback b/c we don't want to get our hopes up. you only post one every 2-3 weeks. no one has time for that $hit. so who cares if you continue or not. NO ONE!!. NEXT!! the story is stupid anyway...doesn't make sense.
2008-12-05 19:31:04
MzKeepItReal,
keep going.. just post quicker.. don't have us waitin because I agree.. we tend to get uninterested..
2008-12-05 19:38:56
yu,
I am so ready for yu to put up the next one!!!
2008-12-06 04:00:11
Mocca,
post quicker and ur fans will be there for u
2008-12-06 08:41:33
Scorpion,
I agree with everyone on here, it don't make sense to ask for feedback and than take so long to post. and than the stories are short and not really telling us y this shit is happening to him. and we get to it already.....
2008-12-07 16:41:23
question...,
..i just started reading this story (cuz I wanted to know what the hype was about)...i def love it..I had to come to the last story and ask if you are from Philly?..this is full of philly slang for examlple 'in my bag' 'shakey butts' and maybe that's why it doesn't make sense to some ppl..they aren't from where I'm from..i so get it and so love it...keep it up

now im bout to go back and finish reading!!!
2008-12-19 12:24:18
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