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IN THE RIGHT PLACE AT THE RIGHT TIME PT.5 ( A STORY BY KING PEN)
Pullin into the parkin lot at Club HUSH, It was easy to see that
ballerz,gold diggerz,hustlerz,and hoez was out on the prowl. Damn, Itz
been a minute since I've been out! Cola explained. I gotta keep it real
tho, I am glad you called me or else I would have had my azz at home
curled up watching some lame azz rerun! No problem girl, you know I
don't fuck with other hoez! Raynel replied. Besidez we got some catchin
up to do, shit Putting this pussy on that ball playin nigga is like a
fulltime job WITH OVERTIME,but it doez come with benefits and insurance
so I aint tripping. Bitch you crazy, but I feel you becuz my job been
kickin my azz lately but tonight imma relax and let my hair down.
Steppin out the $200,000 car like new money, Raynel handed the keyz and
a crisp 50 dollar bill to the man in the burgundy vest and hat working
valet. With a crowd of more than 100 pair of eyez gualkin at either the
bentley or the 2 bad bitches that just hopped out,Raynel walked that
infamous strut she acquired from her time as a model in her earlier
teenage yearz, while the onlookerz made it clear who and what they were
checking out. After makin it past the big black doorman wit the wack
game, the short stockY baldhead guy escorted them to the table in the
secluded vip area where the diamond&platinum rocking, platinum record
selling M.MONEY BAGZ sat with a bodyguard on each side of him, and 3
other tag along niggaz as far as Cola was concerned.
"Whatz good ladies"? The tall dark chocolate cat said while standing up
to give Raynel a hug. After eyeing Cola down and undressing her with his
eyez, Kamren said,"and u must Cola with that coke bottle shape"! while
everybody else at the table burst out laughing. "Yes im Cola"! she
replied flashing those deep dimplez."I guezz I don't have to tell yall
who this nigga is"! referring to M.MONEY BAGZ. "These two big niggas
right here, they the muscle but those to niggaz right there, their just
dead weight"! Kamren explained teasin the tag alongs but really
solidifying everybody position,roll,worth,and reason for being at the
table. Lookin Cola dead in the eyez he said, "and as you already know,
my name is Kam"! "I never told her your name, so how would she know"?
Shot a slightly jealous Raynel. "I was talkin to you" Kam replied! "But
you were lookin at her"! "That's because I don't talk with my eyez,I
talk with my mouth and I assure you baby, I was talkin to you"! "Well
excuse me Mr. Don't Talk With Ur Eyez"! Tunin to Look M.Money dead in
eyez, Raynel said "Well everybody im Raynel, and this is my friend Cola
With the coke bottle shape"! mocking kamren. Hi Raynel!, hi Cola! the
boys said in unison like they were in a A.A meetin."Well both of yall
lookin lovely so please have a seat, relax,and stay awhile"! Said Kamren
who was obviously the mouthpiece of the pack. "Ok but first let us go to
the little girlz room to freshen up and we'll be right back"! Raynel
said while grabin Cola's hand. "Ok but don't keep us waiting to long"
shot back Kam as he admired the two brick house stallionz from the
rear.
"Girl that nigga M.Money look even sexier in person don't he"? Asked
Cola who was applying another coat of lip gloss. Yea that nigga is sexy
as fuck, but I think the nigga Kam is feeling you too"! replied Raynel
who had pulled a 50 dollar bill out her clutch that was folded up
containing that white girl. After takin a pinky nail full up each
nostril Raynel popped a pill in her mouth and offered Cola one. "Girl
you know I don't be fucking around with all that shit, and to be honest
I didn't know you fucked with it either"! Cola said declining her
friendz offer." Just take a half of one and stop being so damn uptight
Ms. Let Your Hair down" pleaded Raynel while breaking a pill in half
sitting it on the 50 dollar bill sitting on the counter. "That's right
bitch,I said I was gonna let my hair down not turn into a dopefiend"!
Cola teased. You know what tho, I did say I would say I was gonna relax
and the coke only stay in your system for 3 dayz so what the hell"! "I
guess I'll take a 1 and 1 Cola said while takin a toot up each nostril
but leavin the half of pill of x on the 50. After makin sure everything
was on point the two girlz exited the bathroom and made their way back
to join the crowd.
"We thought ya'll might've gotten lost"! Kam teased. "Naw we just had to
get a few thingz in order, you know girl stuff"! Raynel replied. "For an
entertainer you sure don't talk much" Raynel said to M.Money who then
leaned over and whispered something in the bodyguard ear. "Money said he
dont speak unless there is money involved" boomed the voice of the big
suge knight built dude. Cola stared at Raynel as if to say bitch what
kind of shit do you got me on but before Raynel could respond with one
of her smart remarks, the pack at the table all burst out laughing from
having makin this a routine joke with the groupiez. "Nigga get yo azz up
and let the lady sit down"! M. Money said while patting the now vacant
seat next to him. Lookin at Cola with lust in his eyez for the time
tonight and a smile on his face Money said,"So whatz up ma, You gonna
stand there all night or what"? "You never offered me a seat" was Cola
reply.
After about an hour of the consecutive cris poppin and purple haze
passin, the coke had takin itz full effect and the
shittalkin,gamerunnin,and pussy juices flowed in abundance.
Ha! Ha! All the niggas except for Money laughed. You remember that bitch
that sucked you dick on one knee? Kam asked the bodyguard. Man that
bitch was a cold freak was the bodyguards reply while they all continued
to laugh hysterically! Interruptin Cola who was off at a distance in
the corner mesmerized,laughing and talkin with a jewel drippin, Money.
Raynel said "Excuse me, I don't mean to interrupt you two but Cola im
about ready to go from around these obnoxious muthafuckaz, no offenses
to you"! she assured Money who's face bared a look that seemed to say
why am I not surprised. "Hold on for one minute would you"!? Cola asked
Money while she led Raynel back towardz the rest room.
"Bitch we just got here"! What you not feeling Kam? Cola questioned.
That nigga sexy azz hell but he talk too fucking much! That nigga will
talk his self into the pussy then fuck around and talk his self out the
pussy" Raynel joked while takin another french manicured nail full of
the coke to the brain. Full of the coke,alcohol and game Money was
runnin on her Cola took another 1 and 1 along wit the half a pill of x
and replied with "well Money invited us back to his suite, I was just
about to come over and get you but you came and got me! I was thinkin
the 4 of us could have had a 4 some Cola jokingly said while flashing
that award winning dimpled filled smile! Girl I don't know about that, I
think I need a fix of my baby Ricky" Raynel seductively replied
referring to her meal ticket. Lettin the liquor and cocaine get the best
of her better judgement, Cola said "well itz time for this pussy to get
fucked and itz not everyday a bitch can get some celebrity dick so imma
see what this lii sexy azz nigga about! Are you sure girl? You can't be
really about to go with all those niggaz! Raynel replied. Don't worry,
that lil young sexy azz nigga seem pretty cool so im sure I'll be
alright. Besidez if that nigga pull some foul shit he can't hide on a tv
screen but im a big girl, im good! Ok big girl, if you say so! Well im
about to sneak outta here so make up something for me and if you need me
call me girl! I'll kill these niggaz if they try some shit! Raynel said
and with that she was gone.
Were yo girl at?asked Kam as Cola approached the table.Oh something came
up so she had to go! Cola said as she sashayed back over to the table in
the corner were Money sat wit a bottle of cristal waiting like a puppy
would wait for his master. So is yo girl game? Money questioned. Oh she
had to take care of something but I told her I was gonna stay and go
back to the suite with you if that's still alright! Most definitely was
Money reply. You in good hands ma, I got you he said with a look of
deceat in his eyez.
I KNOW I HAVEN'T GOT TO THE SUCKIN,FUCKIN,BETRAYAL,MURDER,BACKSTABBIN
AND ALL THAT OTHER GOOD SHIT....LMAO! BUT IN THE WORDZ OF THE YOUNG GOD JIGGA, ITZ ABOUT TO GO DOWN....STAY TUNED AND BE PATIENT, I DON'T WRITE STORIEZ, I WRITE MOVIEZ AND THIS FLICK ABOUT TO GET CRAZY...LMAO!
LOVE IS LOVE THE ONE AND ONLY KING PEN SIGNIN OUT! FUCK WIT ME
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King Pen, get to the good parts, my dude, really.
This is a lot better than yesterday's post, though.
I'm really anticipating the good parts because I really want to give you your due propz. And, no, I'm not trying to make you work overtime for them, I'm more than willing to give propz, where propz are due.
C'mon wid the c'mon, my dude. I know you have it in you; pull that shit up and spit it out.....what are you waiting for? I want to give an honest critiQue of this but, I'll refrain due to my online persona, you know, being mean and rude, unwarranted. I do feel you can blow this shit out the water but, you're holding back for some reason, I love the spelling in this and, your jointz. That's how I had written most of my story; with hood, slang, ebonics.
Good luck my dude, real talk.
iQon!