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Aftershock 8

Darel didn't know what to do. "What da fuck mayne!" He yelled struggling to keep control of the vehicle. Michael had gone crazy and his only priority was getting rid of the people that hurt him most. He did not stop for one second to think about how much he had hurt Sydney. He only wanted Sasha and Darel out of his life for good and then he would think about how he would get Sydney back. The person that Darel saw in his rearview mirror was not his cousin. This person looked possessed, he had nothing but pure hate in his eyes. He wanted Darel dead and he wanted him dead now. He rammed Darel from behind again, this time almost making him run off the road. "Die muthafucka!" Michael screamed. He was determined to make Darel suffer. "He was supposed to be my folk, my blood, and he go and do dis shit to me?! HELL NAWL!! This muthafucka gotta go!" Michael was in a rage, his mind was rushing at a million miles per hour and the adrenaline pumping through his veins made him want Darel dead even more.

Darel was scared out of his mind. Everytime Michael hit him and he didn't crash made him thank God for another second of living. All of a sudden the ramming stopped. He looked in his rearview mirror and Michael had disappeared. "Ahh shit." said a suspicious Darel becoming aware of his surroundings. He was dumb enough to exit off to a more secluded area on the outskirts of Atlanta. He was only surrounded by trees. No street lights. Nothing. He kept checking his rearview only to find nothing. It had became dark outside so he couldn't see anything but the light from his brakes. When he thought that Michael had given up, he looked to his left and saw Michael glaring at him. He was riding alone side him. Michael had crept up beside him with no lights on. Darel was hoping that there would be a road block or something on this road, but as they rode, nothing but trees surrounded them. The look that Michael had in his eyes was enough to pierce a heart. Darel felt sorry for what he had done, but he didn't think that his cousin would take it this far to teach him a lesson. When Darel looked out of driver's side window again Michael was gone. Darel was so scared that he began to sweat. Before he could say anything he was blinded by Michael's headlights coming up from behind him. Michael whipped to the side of Darel and rammed him on his passenger's side. They were speeding down this dark road at dangerous speeds and Michael wasn't going to stop until he was satisfied with the ending. He rammed Darel once more this time causing him to lose control of the vehicle and began flipping.

Michael was giggling with satisfaction as he watched his cousin's car flip into the woods. He knew that it would be days even weeks before someone found him, and by then he'll be dead. "That's what you get you punk ass bitch! Enjoy hell with that bitch Sasha!" Michael had no clue that Sasha had survived being shot.. His priority now was getting Sydney back. He was so wrapped up in this situation that he became obsessed with Sydney and would give anything to have her back.

***

Sasha had been in the hospital for nearly a week now. She had no clue what had transpired between Darel and Michael, or that Darel was left for dead. She had been told that she lost the baby due a gunshot wound to its head. The doctor told her that the baby saved her life because if that baby would not have been there she would have been dead. Sasha had mixed emotions about losing the baby. She only wanted the baby to keep a tight leash on Michael but he didn't know that she was pregnant, and the baby wasn't his to begin with, so what good would that do now given that she had lost the baby? Sasha thought to herself, "I was sittin' there tryna figure out a way to get rid of this bitch Sydney and her baby when I done fucked myself up. Ain't dat a bitch?" Sasha laughed to herself. She didn't know that Sydney and the baby were okay. She was still under the impression that Sydney had lost the baby.

The doctor told Sasha that she would be able to leave the hospital first thing the next morning. She had no family to come pick her up and for some reason she couldn't reach Darel or Michael. "What? These muthafuckas decided to have a family reunion or sum shit? What da fuck?! I know these sorry niggas ain't on no 'blood is thicka than water' type shit. Fuck it, I'll just get a cab up out this bitch. I got some loose ends to tie up any damn ways starting with that bitch Sydney." Sasha intended on making sure Sydney wouldn't get any ideas about getting back with Michael. Sasha knew she had fucked up and Michael may not come back, but he was her property and by all means she would do what was neccessary to keep him. She would show up at her job, her home, threaten her, "fix" the breaks on her car, do whatever she felt would scare Sydney away from good. Sasha was just as crazy as Michael at this point and would do anything to get her man back..

 

 

 

Sorry to have kept you guys waiting and also for this installment being so short but my lil man is sick so im multitasking today.. I'll be back shortly with the next one.. Oh yeah do you guys like having installments or would you rather the entire story? If i post the entire story it could take a little longer to finish.. So let me know what's up.. Thanks for the support!

 
Comments
I love it,
Michael and Sasha meant to be together.. This is some juicy shit right here..lol.. They both crazy as hell.. This bitch was just shot in the stomach and ready to get Sydney?! She a gutter bitch..lol.. But as far as which one i prefer, i suggest the installments.. It keeps the suspense up.. but that's just my opinion
2009-01-12 16:29:41
mocca85,
babes do what u feel u can do right now cause i need read this story u know i always got ur back
mocca aka mocca85
2009-01-12 16:30:00
MzKeepItReal,
Thanks for the support you guys.. i'll get another installment up asap..
2009-01-12 16:31:32
MzKeepItReal,
oh yeah @ mocca you up in the next one.. lol.. you know you gotta help Sydney pull it together..
2009-01-12 16:48:38
iQon,
W.ooooooo.W! This is exciting, this is gooooooood! Really, really, really, goooooood. I'm sho Darel is not dead, though...lol! Look at me, mentioning the characters, as if, I know them personally. This story moves at a rapid pace and, I love reading stories that movea extremely fast. Really good job@MzKeepItReal, really good job. You have my full undivided attention with this story now and, I'm going to be looking forward to each and every chapter. Thanx for being a good writer, just thanx.

Good job. As Rihanna says in-Take A Bow!

" How 'bout around of applause, (um-hum-ha), a standin' ovation. "

iQon!
2009-01-12 17:06:22
MzKeepItReal,
LOL..@ iQon.. You are awesome! Thanks for the support! Still looking forward to your stories..
2009-01-12 17:16:25
iQon,
And@MzKeepItReal,

If you keep it up, doing what your are doing; I just might have to compete with you, of course, with a new screen name; I wouldn't get that much acknowledgement using this screen name....lol! I'm sho, I'll only get cussed out, if I put a story on the board using, iQon,...lol! But, this is really good, really, really, really, really, really, good. Keep up the good work, really.

I feel like, Oprah when she's found a new good book, you know, she always says: " I wanna tell everybody I know to read this book." Then, she introduces it into the Oprah's Book Club..lol!



Vibin' To Rihanna's-Take A Bow!

"But you put on quite a shooow
Really had me goooin
But now it's time to goooo
Curtain's finally clooosin'
That was quite a shooooow
Very entertainin'
But it's over now (But it's over now)
Go on and taaaake a boooooow..

How bout a round of applause
(Um-hum-ha),
A standin ovation..."

iQon!
2009-01-12 17:17:45
StoryTella,
MM Mm Mm again..you've done it again..you go girl..oh BTW is your son feeling better??
ST
2009-01-12 18:21:51
MzKeepItReal,
@ StoryTella.. He's Cutting teeth.. So he's runny a fever and has the squirts..lol.. ew.. you know how that goes.. So he's really mean right now.. but thanks for asking.. Lovin your story! When is Phoenix gonna get it??
2009-01-12 19:03:33
Peanut Butter,
I tell you what - take care of yourself and your boo boo first - but that was cracking!
Whatever you want to do is fine - we know the rest is going to come regardless.

Maybe putting up the full story will take away some of the suspense and anticipation - but I'm so eager to know what is going to happen next.

Keep it up! I will be looking out for the next installment.

PS you might want to consider getting this published - it's smoking hot!

And I agree with iQon - Darel can't be dead!? That would be too easy - I see gunfight at the O kay corall happening!
2009-01-13 08:21:37
Queensawa ,
Girl dis is hot shit lol look out for my post entitled Sex Rated
2009-01-13 13:08:15
MOCCA85,
THANKS IM READY FOR WHAT EVER U THROUGH AT ME AND I KNOW HOW IT IS WHEN KIDS ARE CUTTING TEETH MY DAUGHTER STARTED AT LIKE 2 MONTHS AND IT WAS HELL THE DOCTOR WAS SURPRISED THAT SHE STARTED SO EARLY BUT ANYWAY TAKE UR TIME EVEN THOUGH IM HYPED FOR THE NEXT ONE
2009-01-13 14:31:54
Diva,
How do u edit your stories once u post them
2009-01-13 14:32:26
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