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Let me  make it rain these hoes out there-Lil Wayne

After being home from school and waiting for friends and work to come back into my life I find myself crazy horny but there is only so much xtube a guy can watch. But there was no time for me to be th hoe of the week sure I roll that way. But an old friend called me and wanted to actually know if we could hang out since we were the only ones home for the time being I told him sure im bored out of my freaking mind not to mention I missed my night caps at school that I use to have.

So me and Brian decided that we would hit the club up and drink like shit I was more then down, so we went to a club in the city I was fresh I put on my new graphic tee and a vest that went well with it threw some dunks on and some jeans when he came to pick me up I noticed he FRESH to death in a orange button up and sweater around his neck and some tight azz true religion jeans, so tight that I could see his bulge as soon as we got out the car,as we traveled down there we drank and we drank so more in the car laughing while his cousin drove us down there. We get to the club and the ladies are OUT and I am finally realizing why I really love NEW YORK damn the ladies look so damn good when they go out so we get to the door and the bouncers say sorry my dude buttons up and shoes only I was so drunk and tight I just stormed off the line so Brian chases after me and says yo done even worry about we will find another party to hit up. So we walk and we walk and then we couldnt find the party by then I finished my bottle of hypntiq mixed with 4 shots of patron. Brian says yo let me call my cousin and lets go back home his brother comes and gets us and then we go to his house and drink some more...........The clock strikes 12:37am and Im about to pass out I am so drunk that I ask Brian to take me to the bathroom in his house and he takes me and tells me that I mad loud that I have to be quiet so he comes with me in the bathroom and helps me he unbuckels my pants and tells me yo handle ya bizz I piss and then go back to his room for some reason I immediatly get very horny so I asked Brian if he had some porn I could watch he says nah what I need porn for I say to him cause I wanna get fucked....................

He says word! Your gay I say maybe what is it to you? Brian smiles and says nothing but I just aint know so I say well I am DL and now you know playboy. He comes over and whispers in my ear yo son I think I am DL too whats good? I tell him whats good is his dick in my mouth he closes his door and we begin to get it in I sucked his dick like it was no tommrow he pulled away quick for he was about to bust then he said yo son I aint know you got down like this let me get up in that. I say yes with pleasure he eats me out like mom's homecooked dinner on sunday and get me wetter then I have ever been in the back of my mind I am hoping he swallows lol then it begins to rain and thunder loudly he says damn that azz is so good I tell him baby I am ready for that dick of his then the lighting and flashing begins to get louder and louder.............................

 

To Be Continued

I know you like my style but how much do you like my style-50 Cent

 
Comments
Malek Ariel,
damn damn damn nice story man friend, I love reading tour work ist is so fresh...
2008-07-03 22:27:37
4rmdaboot,
Oh oh watch out Malek, we have another author on our hands! LOL. THe only advice I would have to give you collegeboi, is to take your time, we (readers) really like suspense and in your story you let us know whats going on like right away. Good story, but you can stretch it out some more.
2008-07-03 23:09:03
scoot la flute,
Ok...... The story was straight but no where near as good as Malek's. Practice makes perfect pal
2008-07-06 20:49:40
Collegeboi89,
[No offense to anyone]

I need to step back and work harder so I can continue to make you sick. But while I’m gone get your umbrellas out, because that’s when I brainstorm. I work well under your hating antics, the shade faggots throw in soooo uncalled for gosh.

But that is why I love the haters "pal" give me a break I am so not trying to be like Malek fuck outta here you about to bring the Kanye outta me relax your mind body and soul and leave that ish at the front door "pal" I dont business with you and your hating antics oh man I laugh at this really I do this out of request I have too much on my plate to everyday stories no offense to my man Malek. You tryna come for me!! Try AGAIN!
2008-07-06 22:27:36
scoot la flute,
First of all guy lets making something crystal clear. I am not hating on you, just giving my opinion. Im entitled to say what I want when I want. Maybe you shouldnt focus so much on reciting every rap artists lines and focus more on perfecting your craft. I never said the story was wack, I only said it wasnt as good as Malek's. Dont take that as me hating, take it as constructive criticism. That should be your motivation.
2008-07-07 00:57:10
moe,
lol...WOW...im at a lost for words...it was a very nice story...i mean the imagination is so wonderful dont you all agree...Malek he is your protege'.. Nice work...
2008-07-07 08:56:19
Collegeboi89,
Thanks Moe......
2008-07-07 11:15:01
Malek Ariel,
Collegeboi89, stay true to you man. Don't try to be anyone else just be you and do you.

I love your writings and stick to it, trust me the more you write the more you will grow.

Your Big Brother MA...

2008-07-07 11:38:31
Malek Ariel,
@scoot la flute, thanks for reading and keep reading his work, trust me it will only get better. Go back and read my first few parts and you will understand what I mean. Be ecouraged to all...
2008-07-07 11:40:26
4rmdaboot,
WOW, so i guess @scoot la flute and I are the "haters", i guess "people" cant handle when others r being real and they ask for their honest opinion. If u think ur story was that good, then take it to a publisher and c how they turn it down. Thanks for the comment, but I know this will be my last time reading any of your stories.
2008-07-07 19:14:34
Collegeboi89,
Play boi I could care less but I wasnt talking to I guess you feeling some type of way about Scoot [keep ya man close]

I dont like this talking bull shit
2008-07-08 12:09:45
scoot la flute,
I'm a chick
2008-09-16 22:17:54
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