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Thug Jail Brother (Part 50)

 

Thug Jail Brother (Part 50)
MEMO TO SELF: ...All Good Things Must Cum To An End...

That bastard killed my daughter, he is a switch hitter, a punk and he killed my daughter. She is dead because you where not honest, you killed her and I hope you die and go to hell. You gave my baby AIDS, I was like, Jesus take the wheel, oh Lawd, I can’t take this, somebody pray for me, I can’t breath. I could not make this shit up and that fool just sat there acting like she was talking to some one else. Mac D says oh shit, this is a big ass church and I am about to get on my hands and knees and crawl up out of here. I told that fool that he was stupid, mother finally sat down and the church was as quit as a Catholic Church on Sunday morning. It was like no one wanted to follow that act, the Pastor stood and said let us pray. When he finished his prayer, we looked back and Mark and his boy toy or should I say girl toy were gone.  The Pastor was so confused he said let us pray again, this young lady got up and started singing, Precious Lord Take My hand. Why did that hussy sing that damn song, there was not a dry eye in the place. Mother Michaels laid across Lora’s coffin and she cried and it took three men to pull her off. As the pallbearers carried the coffin down the isle Mother Michael’s tried to leap on it. Then, she let a scream that landed at the top of the church steeple; in all my life I have never heard such a blood curling scream.

 I was so glad this services was over, as we exited the church I introduced Mac D to Malek and Lady Moe. As Mac D spoke with Malek I was chatting with Lady Moe and she was telling me how much she loved Malek. I was a little jealous, but I understood, I saw Mac D give Malek his number and whisper something in his ear. They came walking towards us and Mac D asked Malek if he was staying overnight and he said he was thinking about it. Mac D told him the he could stay at the Four Seasons and just charge it to his account. He also told Malek that if he decided to stay that he would send his car over later and he could come by the office. I was like, Mac D is trying to hard to get some of Malek and you know what I am not even tripping. I call Ahmad while they are talking and he is hanging out with some friends and will meet me after 9:00 pm at the hotel. So, I called Dr. Manny and he wants to meet in the Village for drinks and dinner. I told him that I will call him after my meetings.

Mac D is ready to head back to the office; the driver opens the doors to the Escalade and we have a crazy ass conversation about the funeral. Then he tells me that Malek is going to come by the office later this evening and he starts laughing. I tell him he better be careful, your ass just paid out a hundred grand for the last sexual harassment case. Mac D said this will not going to be a problem, who is he going to tell that I then been up in his ass. I explain to him that Malek is a total top and nothing and I mean nothing goes up in his ass not even a finger. Mac D says, yeah right baby, I got a grand to give you if I don’t get the ass; I say it is on man. I attended several meetings and took care of a lot of business, as I was coming out of the main conference room and who’s sitting in the lobby but Malek. I go and speak to him and I say what the fuck you are doing here, I told you to keep your ass home.  Malek said, I am so glad I did not listen to you, boy look what I would have missed. Oh my Lawd, I have never been to a funeral like this. As I was stand there talking to Malek the receptionist same Mr. Dupree, Mac D will see you now in his private conference room.

As Malek walked away my phone was ringing and I looked down and it was The Prophet and he said I have someone here that wants to speak to you. On the other end I hear a very faint voice saying boy, what you doing in New York; I told her that I was taking care of business. I told Ms. Sheba that I was sorry and she said for what, you almost getting killed, boy it’s not your fault, now you know these kids are crazy. Ms. Sheba started to cough and it scares me; I am screaming are you ok, Ms. Sheba, Ms. Sheba and finally she answered, I am fine. I tell her how much I miss her and tell her to get her ass out of that bed and get back to work before I fire her ass. Ms. Sheba said you know Miss Sheba will work her magic on you, she was sounding so weak. I told her that I will be back in town on tomorrow and my first stop will be to see her and then Ms. Sheba said I will see you then. Before she hung up she said, KA, KA, KA, POW, in a real faint whisper. I started crying and she hung up, oh how I miss her, she always kept me straight and her better hurry up and get her ass straight. I call Dr. Manny and tell him that I will be leaving the office in about an hour.

I go to Mac D’s office and he is in his private conference room, it has a camera and there is a monitor in his office that is on. Knowing Mac D he is recording this for his own protection, I feel kind of cheap sitting in his office watching them freak. As I sit and watch the show I wish I had some popcorn or something. Malek makes the first move and he goes over to Mac D and kisses him on the lip, I am like not Mr. a kiss means too much to be kissing just anyone. Mac D unzips Malek’s belt and his pants falls to the floor, and he is standing there on his boxers with his pants around his ankles. Mac D takes off his tee shirt and his pants; he then takes off his boxer briefs. Damn, this boy dick is bigger and thicker then Malek’s; there is no way he is going to get up in Malek’s ass. I am sitting there thinking about how I will spend my thousand dollars. Mac D takes Malek’s head and pushes it into his lap and he is sucking Mac’s dick, a few time he starts to choke. While he is sucking his dick, Mac D starts to play with Malek’s ass, as he is playing with his ass I hear Malek groining and making noises. That is not a good sign, if you ever want to know if you can fuck a top, play with his ass hole and if he starts moving it and groining then bingo.

Mac D spits on his finger and slowly puts it in Malek’s ass; I am sitting there in shock. Mac D goes over to a cabinet and pulls out what appears to be magnum xxl condoms and some lube. He slides on a condom and lubes up Malek’s ass, the next thing I know Mac D has Malek laying across the conference room table and fucking the shit out of him. To my surprise Malek is taking that dick like it is not his first time, damn I owe Mac D a thousand bucks. I should go in there and hit that fat ass for myself, my baby is getting fucked, some one slap me please. Wow, I am speechless, what I need is Ms. Sheba here right now giving her colorful commentary. When Mac D finished doing his business, he told Malek to put his clothes on and he could exit though the other door and the car would take him back to his hotel. Malek looked like he thought something else was going to happen. Mac D came into his office and I was sitting there and he asked if I enjoyed the show and then he said where my fucking money. I was still speechless for sure; he said he only did it with me because he thought he would get something out of it. But, it was just a fuck and run, his ass is now old news. Malek finally met his match and he had to take it up his ass, it is about time Malek gets fucked and fucked over. As I get ready to leave Malek is in the lobby waiting on the car and it appears that we are both in the same car. The driver says he will drop Malek off first and then he will drop me off.

As we sit in the car I ask Malek how as his meeting and he said painful, I wanted to scream, but I was acting like I did not know what had happened. Malek said I love you man and I want to ask you a big, big favor to ask you.  I would like for you to be my best man in our wedding, it felt like a Mac truck just hit me head on. You want me to do what, in what and he said his wedding, I am going to propose to Lady Moe tonight. I need to know if I can trust you with a secret, I said sure you can. Malek said that Lady Moe is with child and we need to get married before the church finds out. This is just too much for me to take, wedding and a baby, what the fuck is going on. I tried to keep my composure but Malek could see right through it, he said are you alright with all of this. I said not really Malek, but what choice do I have, you are going to do what you want to do, so what am I suppose to say. He says just say congratulations, he leans over and kisses me on my lips and then we start making out. I was so freaking hot, I wanted Malek to take me right in that car. Just when he went to unzip my pants we where at his hotel and I kissed him good night and said I will be honored to be your best man and your baby’s god father. 

 Malek get out of the car and I head to meet Dr. Manny, as we drive to the Village I just loose it and start crying. I think I was crying as hard as Lora Michael’s mom, Malek is getting married and having a baby. I can’t take this; I did not feel like meeting Eric I really just wanted to go to the hotel and sleep. We arrive at the restaurant and Eric already has our table, we are sitting in the window at this quant and romantic table for two. I walk in and I am escorted to the table, Eric or should I say Dr. Manny tell me that he has already ordered for me. This man is walking around the restaurant selling roses and Eric buys me a dozen of roses. I was ecstatic and I grab his hand and just hold it, just then I lookup and who is standing in the window but Ahmad. He walks away from the window at a very fast pace and I get up and run after him and can not find him. I go back to the restaurant and explain to Eric, that I have been dating Ahmad and I think I just fucked up. Eric lets me know that he only dates single men and if he had know that something was going on with Ahmad and I, he would have never asked me out to dinner. He then suggests that I go get my man, I rush back to the hotel and when I get there all of Ahmad’s stuff is gone and there is no sign of him. How is it; that one man can loose three men in one evening? I guess you can’t loose something that you never had, I guess the question is can you really ever have a downlow brother? I would venture to say no, because he will always want more, more of what I can not give him. Where do I go from here, to be honest I am not sure what life has in store for me. All I know is that life will not be boring; Jason Alexander will survive, but with survival comes more scars. 

 

Malek Ariel, aka MA

 
Comments
scoot la flute,
Not malek taking it up the azz! So it aint so. I'm glad my girl ms sheba is doing alright. I need her to get back to 100 percent. And what's gonna happen with jason and ahmad? Gimme more. Hugs and kisses fam
2008-07-27 22:04:06
Collegeboi89,
Brother, and family help me out here 50 usually means its the END.....I dont see any to be continued either, I dont wanna say
its OVER but is it really Im so lost?
2008-07-27 22:28:35
Guest ,
Is it over. I am sad now. Well if it is thank you malek for this wonderful stories. This has really britten up my year to read these. You should really try to write books.
2008-07-27 22:52:04
NewOrleansPryncess,
"is this the ennnd..R u my friennd... Aw, baby, is this the end? Mama told me one day it was gonna happen But she never told me when.She told me it would happen when I was much older. Wish it would´ve happened then." (4 u youngins...New Edition, 1983 Is this the end)

well I hope that the end of thug jail brotha saga only means ur starting ova with something new..I liked the ending..cuz I can imagine what's gon prolly happen..and u kinda closed each character story..

what's next fam for us??
ummm okay collegeBOI soooo now u need to grab that torch...where is Summer Rain 13?? I neeeeeeeeeeeed my fix dammit!!




2008-07-28 00:03:05
scoot la flute,
Collegeboi- I just noticed that it didn't say to be continued. That was a nice way to end the story. But there better some more coming. Until then.... Let's go SUMMER RAIN
2008-07-28 00:10:26
NewOrleansPryncess,
oh yea...

so basically..malek finally got f-ked; Moe knocked up; sheba Kapowed and woke up;ahmad got stuck..packed his shyt up..and then got dee f-kk; Manny manned up..Lil Z & Taye lucked up.. and Jason tried to hav his cake, steak, and milkshake and ended up with the gas face!!!

love u malek ariel!! hope u gon hit us with the next batch of drama!!

the saga continues....
2008-07-28 00:14:40
Lil Z,
Wow NewOrleansPryncess, you wrapped it up girl. But, I know that there is more to this story and damit I won't sleep until I get to the rest of the story.

Here is my final quote...
"Malek finally met his match and he had to take it up his ass, it is about time Malek gets fucked and fucked over. As I get ready to leave Malek is in the lobby waiting on the car and it appears that we are both in the same car. The driver says he will drop Malek off first and then he will drop me off.

As we sit in the car I ask Malek how as his meeting and he said painful, I wanted to scream, but I was acting like I did not know what had happened."
2008-07-28 05:44:08
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2008-07-28 06:06:27
yaeyae,
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttttt..malek takin it up the ass..never thought that i would read that..but shit he prolly been doin that..jason had to fuck it up wit ahmad..dat slimy bitch..jason just needs to runaway and never cum the fuck back..
2008-07-28 06:10:47
boynamesue,
Please say it is not so, no I got to buy a black suite, what the hell am I going to do with myself every morning? I am sitting here at work crying, I am taking this harder then when Ms. Sheba got hurt. Malek Ariel, please say it is not so. Malek we need to hear from you, Melek where are you.

2008-07-28 06:16:12
Anti-DL,
NOOOOOOOOO!!! Plz say it ain't so? Over.....dang I guess all good things have 2 come 2 an end....every character has been identified & explained....but I just loved this story soo much & got used 2 lookin forward 2 it every morning....dang....I need a min ya'll (tear)
2008-07-28 07:45:34
Baltobentley,
Malek,

This has been a wonderful ride..LOL You have a great
talent and I know this is not the end.

Thanks for forming a (DL CONFESSION family). I'M sure I can speak you everyone. We are looking foreward to seeing whats next.

Much LUV,
Prez. of your fan club!
2008-07-28 08:20:22
NewOrleansPryncess,
o where o where is my M.A. gone? im telling yall fam the next saga gon be on hardback...that wud be the smart thing to do!! shooo you know e'erybody will cop it!!

@lil Z ...u know..lol..a lil razzle dazzle!!

2008-07-28 08:20:56
Lil Z,
Damn, I keep checking back to see if it is really the end.

Is today April fools day?
2008-07-28 08:29:51
4rmdaboot,
Goodmorning Fam,
All I can say is Im through.......I am so sad, I truly wish this is not the end, but all good things must come to an end.
2008-07-28 08:35:03
DAMN DAMN DAMN,
It is like I woke up and found a love one dead. JESUS...
2008-07-28 09:47:52
,
I'm lost....who gave Lora Michaels AIDS? I thought it was Malek!
2008-07-28 09:59:33
,
Her boyfriend gave it to her, some guy name Mark, who was on the DL but I think Malek will some how one day pop up positive...
2008-07-28 10:04:56
Blze_Blu,
This can't be the end....I'm so depressed.....
2008-07-28 11:50:49
moe,
OKAY...now Malek's taking it up the butt...Lady Moe knocked up....Mr.Ed locked up....the whole church sized up Mark...And Jason needs to to reach (up)...and ask God to help him with his issues....and as far as this storying ending...well it might but he can start another story that kinda intertwines with this one like the one E.Lynn Harris did.
we will see.....
2008-07-28 11:51:12
Collegeboi89,
Family dont be sad I guess its true when they say

[All good things must come to an end]

Who is to say this will be the last of Malek I encourage everyone and I mean EVERYONE to please please please come to the chat room and lets find out the real deal also if you continue to read my stories I will try my best not to bore you I know its NOTHING like Thug Jail Stories but SUMMER RAIN hold hisself down I just need more time

God Is More Then Love

signed
Collegeboi89
2008-07-28 13:37:51
meta69,
now what am i going to do while i am working swing shift??? i wanted jason to find somebody to love him!!! i thought the dr. manny may have been the one. not ahmad. thank you for an enjoyable story!!! hopefully there will be more stories to come.
2008-07-28 23:46:02
DL-BI-Furious,
neworleansprincess hit it on the money!!!!!! my favorite quote is
"so basically..malek finally got f-ked; Moe knocked up; sheba Kapowed and woke up;ahmad got stuck..packed his shyt up..and then got dee f-kk; Manny manned up..Lil Z & Taye lucked up.. and Jason tried to hav his cake, steak, and milkshake and ended up with the gas face!!!" great end man!

2008-07-29 16:16:26
skylardennisIII,
bout time
2008-07-29 16:20:34
J-Rocka,
This story was amazing. The author should make this a movie. It was off the hook sooooooo much better than the DL Chronicles
2008-08-26 12:37:59
Bettyboop1024,
This story was off the hook I could move away for a minute.
2008-08-27 19:03:35
faye,
Dear Author,
Do not EVER write anything again. People got jobs they gotta do, kids to feed. Hell, I can't even get to the post office to pay my mortgage because I can't STEP AWAY FROM THE COMPUTER! ! ! lol. That was a great story and very enlightening for a straight woman who now thanks to you will stay SINGLE for the rest of her life. LOL. I just stumbled onto this site so what's next? *sigh* let me go pay my damn mortgage.
2008-08-29 10:48:56
Just me,
I am a straight female, I love reading this story. you should really think about publishing!! I think you have great potential.
2008-09-01 06:12:32
mookie,
i loved them all except this one..... y end it where it makes no sense?? highly disappointed
2008-09-01 23:55:12
G,
i sat here and read every part today. i was so hooked into the story! this is the end??
I liked this story alot. im a straight female and i really liked this story.
i really hope u make more :)
2008-09-03 12:40:20
,
If your ass don't publish this book you are a damn fool. I am a straight female and I loved reading this. It would be a best seller.
2008-09-03 14:15:32
THISWASTHESHIT,
IM A STRIGHT FEMALE AND I READ THIS FROM BEGINNING TO END ALL DAY! I WAS GLUED TO THE COMPUTER SCREEN!! I LOVED IT...THERE WERE A FEW SPELLING MISTAKES BUT I DIDNT EVEN CARE I JUST FIGURED IT OUT N KEPT GOIN!! LOVE THE DRAMA WHEN IS THE NEXT STORY LINE COMING??
2008-09-03 20:25:48
Lust,
Absolutely wonderful I am a straight woman and im hooked please put that in a book and and make a part show us how malek and lady moe and the child out of wedlock comes along and if jason ever settles down and straightens himself out taye and lil z do they consumate their relationship and does malek really have HIV, or has he been lieing about that as well and how is he going to marry lady slut and he kissing jason. And Sheba how will she recover 100% Ka Pow. will the prophet ever come out the closet. and they other suspect in shebas case did they catch him... Stay protected know your stats and wrap it up. love yall. be blessed
2008-09-04 09:20:35
FeeFee,
Why lawd whhhhyyy? Say it aint so!!! Please come back to us!! I read this story nonstop! I agree that this story should be tied in with another story or book the way E. Lynn Harris does or Mary Morrison does..Keep up the great work Malek!!
2008-09-05 22:40:17
MsD,
This was a great story! I'm a straight female and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I really hope that you give us more by getting this published and adding more sagas of Jason Alexander.
2008-09-06 16:15:23
GooD Pu$$y,
I am very sad that Malek is marrying and having a baby, and Jason is all alone. This is a great story u did a good job
2008-09-07 13:31:03
Ms Sheba ,
Ok, First off thank you! Second why does it have to stop? You need to take all these entries and go get it published and finish writing this story. Please don't tell me there is no where to go because there is. Ms Sheba and her man. Malik ass getting married lol thats so shit by it's self. Oh a Ahmad can be mad so what next and Manny knew what the deal was just like any gay man he saw something thru that net out now Mr Malek I already told you your trying to get a bitch fired, lol the least you could do is get me the book so while i'm home suffering and looking for work i Have ka pow your book to read
2008-09-08 11:37:07
Avid Reader,
Awwwww. I'm so sad its over. I keep thinking that maybe you will give us more. I thouroughly enjoyed your novel, please continue to write because you definitely have a gift. Take this from someone who reads all types of books and at least 2 a week. Now I get to add your story to the many i've read! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
2008-09-09 19:35:39
freakyfrog69,
I HOPE THAT YOU WRITE MORE THIS SERIES IS A WORK OF ART!! WE NEED MORE!!
2008-09-09 20:14:32
Edubb,
OMG its over this gets me through my last hour at work GIVE ME MORE... I need MORE!!
2008-09-15 13:57:51
sotired,
My world is over. I haven't done any work for the last day and a half trying to read this. People coming to my desk bothering me and i have to minimize. Malek you really have a talent and you need to share this with the world. I am not a big reader (sad i know) but i could not stop reading this and telling eveyone I know about this including my DL boyfriend. Please brother bless us with more stories.
2008-09-17 15:23:29
new-b,
This is the best story I've read in years!!!! I hope the author brings it back or starts a new story. I will read that too. I started reading this last week and just finished today. This is a great fuckin' story.
2008-09-18 15:13:50
Malek Ariel,
Thanks for the encouragement and I hope to start writing real soon.
2008-09-21 23:14:22
,
I am a straight female and this was a good ass story I couldn't stop reading it..there was a few spelling errors but other then that it was great..when are you gonna write something else?
2008-09-22 12:29:28
poodie,
damn im sittin here wit bubblw guts..... had to take a shit but couldnt move till i finished the story....come on you can leave us hanging like this
2008-11-05 23:43:29
JC,
This is an explicit romance novel....without the talent and skill that an actual novelist would have. I am sad to say there will be many who would actually show interest in this piece and it is sad because it is not actual literature, please just work on your writing level i can see my younger siblings writing something like this with the same reaction, its not all about the content but the way it was written! Nothing but a porn with words. It seems you can right anything and command the black audiences attention the way you use words doesnt matter as long as it has something sexual with some kind of twist for those of us the the very short attention span.
2009-03-04 14:18:02
SCass,
All I can say is WOW! Also I would like to say to JC, please get a life. Everyone has there own opinion, which they are entitled too. I for one do not hav a very short attention span. I am very well educated and read on a daily basis. These stories were truly entertaining and I for one cannot wait for the next series. Malek, best of luck in your future endeavors and I look forward to reading more of your work. Not to mention, I would love to be one of your character. Yes, I am a married with children black educated female. Much respect!
2009-03-07 19:24:56
Okay ,
I been reading this from beginning to end, and this Jason, fellow is a hoe/slut/tramp. Why can't he just stay with man. He's a real slutface. Other than that I LOVE the story and Ms. Sheba is my favorite.
2009-06-26 15:35:56
g. d. freightman,
Check out, LULU to get yourself published. It's free... and you can get your writing copywritten. I've read 1 through 10 of your story.... keep up the good work. Here's the lulu website. http://www.lulu.com/publish/?cid=en_tab_publish
2009-09-24 01:13:37
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