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Deception #6

 

Mona~

On to my other life. If Manny ever found out, I don't know what he would do. There is alot about me that he doesn't know. And he doesn't have to know. I will keep it real I am an Escort for high profile men.  At first it was to have extra money in my pockets when Manny wasn't bringing in the money he is now. Now its to support my drug habits. I started doing different drugs to clear my mind of all this shit I am doing to Manny. He is a good guy. And he promised me that I will have everything I want plus more once he gets his stuff together. And he has. But the thrill of being with other men and living in somewhat of a fantacy it worth it. My pimp is very good to me, he keeps me with work since I am his biggest money maker. 

Mona- Shawn were to tonight?

Shawn- Charles needs a 3 day

Mona- I can't do a 3 day Manny is home. 

Shawn- He is paying double for you so you need to contact Manny tell him what you want but you going to get this money.

Mona- where are we going?

Shawn- Vegas. And he said last time you went with him you were as lucky as a red head. 

Mona- is there any way we can leave tomorrow.

Shawn- Bitch I don't like all this lip get your shit together cuz you are going... TONIGHT

Mona- Fine, Fine. Do you have anything for me?

Shawn-you know it comes out of your percentage.

Mona- I know I just need to get some to feel good.

Shawn- Pills, Powder, or you can try this

Mona- what is that?

Shawn-oh I know you will like this, have you ever tried acid?

Mona- thats for them white folks

Shawn- Black, White, brown it don't matter...if you a user you are just a user. Want to try it or not?

Mona- I will take some powder and let me try the acid.

Shawn- Oh also once you get back I have some plans for you to go out to Brazil with Mr.Williams.

Mona- you know he gives me the creeps. How long?

Shawn- 2 weeks

Mona- 2 weeks?

Shawn- yea 2 weeks. think of it as a vacation

Mona- I can't deal with him for 2 weeks

Shawn- you know lately you been complaining alot. Don't I keep you working?

Mona- Yes but I feel since I have been working with you so long that maybe I can have say as to what and when.

Shawn- Bitch you not working with me your working for me so you aint got say as to shit. I don't hit you do I?

Mona- No

Shawn- You are the only one i don't put into place when shit gets sticky and you are the only one that complains. Do I have to start beating your ass so you can be grateful?

Mona- No I am so sorry Shawn. I am grateful for all that you do for me I will go on this 3 day and work him so good he will be offering to pay you triple next time to have me!

Shawn- Yea thats the girl I know

Man I really don't know what to tell Manny. The first wekend he has been hom in a while and this shit comes up. But I got to make this bread. I may have to suck up my pride and call Jasmine to see if she can cover for me. Nah that fucking bitch been trying to hook Manny up with any and every chick she knows. Thinking I'm no good she she need to check Joeys ol' cheatin ass. I know what I'll do

Manny- Hello sexy I am a little fucked up but I am leaving now

Mona- Oh babe I have to leave

Manny- what?

Mona- my god mother just past and I have to go and see my god brother

Manny- well I will go with you

Mona- NO! I have to do this alone bye!

Manny- Mona...Mona

{ Mona gets into her car and starts driving towards 495. Just as she is about to merge she sees police behind her flashing their lights. Mona pulls over}

Mona- Hello officer

Officer- Licence and Registration please

Mona- here you go

Officer- do you know why we stopped you mame

Mona- no

Officer- You ate 2 lights

Mona- I am sorry I just got word my god mother died and I was telling my husband I am going to see my god brother.

Officer- sorry to hear that mame. I will check to make sure you have no warrents and write up your ticket and you shall be on your way.

{Officer checks, and she has a warrant for Her arrest}

 

Joey~

Seeing Jasmine made me think. I need to stay home tonight maybe even for this weekend. I'll have to think about what i am going to tell Tasha. Fuck it though Jazzy deserves it.

Joey- Jaz you ready ?

Jasmine- Yea babe

Joey- I am too fucked up can you drive?

Jasmine- yup

Joey- I love you

Jasmine- I love you too

Joey- I know I am a fuck up and I don't treat you like you are my queen but you are.

Jasmine- you do treat me like a queen papi. Don't you see  those movies ...the king gets to sleep around with any woman he wants but he always comes back to the queen. I have the best part of you.

Joey- Jaz stop with all this cheating shit.

Jasmine- just cause I havn't caught you doesn't mean I don't know. Lets go I am tired

{ At Jasmines house}

Jasmine- oh so you been home?

Joey- yea thanks for dinner arrow con pollo my favorite.

Jasmine- Your daughters too. I swear she is becoming more and more like you.

Joey - I can't wait to see her. Can we pick her up early?

 Jasmine- my mother is dropping her off.

Joey- even better, now bring that phat ass over here

Jasmine- come and get it

{ they made love all that night  and once the sun was up, as promised Jasmines mother was at the door}

Jasmine- good morning ladies

Millie- good morning! no time to talk I have to try to go to all the yard sales I can

Jasmine- oh mom hold up I got your money

Millie- oh this is great I get paid to spend time with my grand daughter

Cynthia- your favorite grand daughter

Millie- my only grand daughter

Jasmine- here mom $500, have fun shopping maybe you will go to the mall instead

Millie- one mans trash another

Cynthia- mans treasure

Jasmine- oh mom please don't do that to my daughter

Millie- no you don't make her so materialistic. I hate cooky little kids

Jasmine- oh Cyn I almost forgot I have a big surprise for you

Cynthia- what mommy, what

Jasmine- we have to make breakfast then I will show you

Millie- I guess thats my cue to leave. cuz that surprise don't need breakfast he needs a kick in the ass

Cynthia- He? We got a dog!!!

Millie- yea thats exactly what you have

Jasmine- bye mom

Millie- no need to throw me out I am leaving. Just make sure he doen't break my grand daughters heart as much as he breaks yours.

Jasmine- I love you bye

Millie- I'm leaving but I tell you this...you know what forget it you've heard it all before.

{Millie leaves counting her money}

 

Jasmine~

I love Joey and all but maybe my mothers right. She always does this to me.

Cynthia- Can I get my surprise yet mommy

Jasmine- first we have to prepare a nice breakfast...anything you want

Cynthia- Well I want pancakes, bacon, sausage, eggs and those potatoes you make I don't know what they are called

Jasmine- Home fries?

Cynthia- yea I can peel the potatoes like last time!

Jasmine- oh Cyn you made a big mess last time

Cynthia- I know but I won't this time promise

Jasmine- how can you be so sure little one

Cynthia- I just know..plus I am wiser

Jasmine -  (laughs) that was only a few weeks ago and where is all this coming from

Cynthia- Grandma sayes you learn something new every day

Jasmine- I think you need to take a break from hanging out with Grandma Millie

Cynthia- Mom I don't like to go to Daddys mothers house its spooky

Jasmine-yea but she would like to see you every now and then

Cynthia- so can I do the eggs

Jasmine- you do them best so sure.

{after breakfast is done}

Cynthia-Mom there is a lot of food

Jasmine- thats cuz we have to feed your surprise so that it can wake up

Cynthia- my surprise drinks coffee?

Jasmine- yes

Cynthia- dogs aren't supposed to drink that stuff mom!

Jasmine- well this one loves it go to mommys room

{Joey can hear little footsteps come towards the room so he covers his face with the blanket}

Cynthia- mom theres nothing here

Jasmine- Really? did you look under the bed

Cynthia- nothing mom

Jasmine- closet

Cynthia- nothing here either...do you really have a surprise for me?

Jasmine- you know what you got me I just wanted to lay in the bed with you and eat breakfast

Cynthia- well you can just ask me mom. Lies are no good Grandma Millie says your nose grows when you tell a lie

Jasmine- Well then...my nose hasn't gotte bigger so there must be a surprise in here some where Jump on the bed and I will get it

Joey- Ouch

Cynthia- Daddy! oh wow you are the best surprise ever

Joey- i miss you cutie

Cynthia- now we can spend the whole day together

Jasmine- well he has to eat his breakfast first...Honey Cyn mad you breakfast

Joey- all by her self

Cynthia- mom was my helper

Joey- so whats on the menu cutie

Cynthia- Eggs, bacon, sausage, Pancakes, and fires plus I made fresh orange juice and coffee all for my daddy

Joey- you are getting to be like your mom...cooking all this stuff for daddy I can't wait

Cynthia- are you staying this time?

Joey- I am staying for the weekend and then Daddy has to go back to work

Cynthia- oh beacuse I have a play at school on Tuesday and I wanted you to see me. I have the most biggest part

Joey- Oh I may have to..

Jasmine- I will record it and send it to daddy

I hate when Joey lies to her. She gets her hopes up and then he lets her down. I hope he really is staying the weekend now that he said that. I have to deal with a broken hearted little girl while he gets to do what he wants. I am so tired of Joey and his shit. I think this will be our last weekend together.

{Phone rings}

Jasmne- Hello

Manny- hey Jaz I need to talk to Joey quick

Jasmine- is everything ok?

Manny- No Mona got arrested last night

 

Amanda~

I just keep playing that whole thing with Joey over and over again in my head. Why should Jasmine get the best of him when my heart is on the line too. I get abortion money and she gets a night rolling in the sheets with him. Who the fuck does he think he is. Oh he is going to pay. If I can''t have my child they can't have theirs.....

 

Tasha~

Where the hell am I and how did I get here? It smells bad and I have the worst head ache. All I remember is...Well I really don't remember anything at all except seeing Joey out. Oh shit I hear footsteps I need to know whats going on Let me pretend I am still sleeping

Nia- Well Jordan you have her here now weres my money?

Jordan- Not so fast...whats the rush?

Nia- I have shit to do now I need my money so I can be on my way

Jordan- Don't you want to be here for the main show? You said you had some unfinish business with her also

Nia- I am satsified with bringing her here to you and I know you will do whats best.

Jordan- Kill...is that what you think I would do to our precious Tasha

Nia- no I don't think youwould kill her but give her a beating yea I think you would beat her up pretty bad.

Jordan- do you know what I went through in Jail?

Nia- no but I would like to know where is my MONEY

Jordan- you will get your fuckin money when I say not when you say....So sit down and lets talk alittle while I would like her to know who bought her

Nia- that was not part of the deal Jordan

Jordan- you really don't know who you are messing with smart mouth

NIa- nah mutha fucka you don't know who you are messing with (nia pulls out her gun) now pay me before it gets ugly in theis bitch

Jordan- don't pull out unless you are ready to use it...BOYS!

{6 men came out from every direction}

Nia-What the fuck

Jordan- oh your not that bad now huh...see this could have been easy I just wanted to wait til she was awake so she can see who bought her to me and she will see that she really hurt you and you never forgave her was that so hard? But since you want to play like this ....Boys tie this bitch up next to her friend we are going to have a ball with these hot as bitches

Nia- look we can start over..please

Jordan- I don't do...do overs bitch now you hurt my feelings like that bitch right there. Business is business.

 

 
Comments
Special K,
Bravo!! Bravo!! Excellent Script. This just keeps getting better & better. Thank You for painting a vivid picture. That is what I call pure entertainment. I am looking forward to your next post. No matter how long it takes.
2009-06-02 09:41:48
mocca85,
i agree with ^^^ this was fire i mean really u gotta keep it coming i cant believe it
karma is a bitch for nia
2009-06-03 21:51:52
Miss Wet Wet,
Thanks for all the support good and bad.

**to the person that left me that message in my inbox (you know who you are) I wrote this story as a script. so if you didn't catch on please call 1800-ABCDEFG. Or when you see that I have posted a chapter just don't read it. I mean it aint for you to try and down the next sista. IF you aint feeling it then don't click its just that easy. I got some readers that want to know what happends and I intend to finish this story out even when people don't want to read it anymore. I am just that type of chick always finish what I start.

But again thanks to all my supporters.
2009-06-04 15:22:28
i like...,
great !!!!!!!!!!!! omg this is good ...keeo it coming!
2009-06-05 12:21:09
Wow |.,
This Story Is Stupid...Ridiculous...Entertaining...Can't Wait 4 More Installments...So Can U Get To Writing ASAP!
2009-06-06 04:33:51
Sunshine,,
Man don't let the haters get you down. I LOVE this story.
2009-06-10 19:51:54
Clouds,
Lookey Here Bitch WETWET!! Finish this muthr already! You got a bitch drooling like a rabid zebra!! These crooked fukrs!! OOOOOOOHHH, I cant wait! Get on your job homie! Im loving it, keep up the good work..... Now....Go,,,, stop reading shit! GO type!!!!!
2009-07-29 18:36:48
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